sick sentences

The ball came soaring towards Richie like a  flying saucer. He jumped into the air as high as he could  . He shout out his hands as fast as a rocket . He was so excited to win the world cup. It was up to him to score the try......... 

Show don't tell

tell: Jack black was shocked
 his heart raced a million miles & his face was as pale as a penguin stomach.jack black was shocked as he walked into his room and his fries where gone and his eyes watered like a water fall.

tell: ad revenue please was excited to see his dad
jumping up and down like a crazy kangaroo running as fast as a Lamborghi and hugging as tight as a bear.

tell: Kody was sad.
tears ran down Kody's eyes as his lips quivered because his dad went to war and didn't come back.

film festival stuff

film festival  stuff

Today we went  to the film festival and watch 14 short films my favourite movie was the frog one

because it look's the same as what a actual a frog or a tadpole look's like. I just like how it look so 

real.  It's cool that when he falls  a sleep he grow's legs and arms it is just Soooo cool 

chose Tuesday writing

So I did carpentry I did it with Marley, Cody & Mansour  in my class. I am  making a cricket bat I've cut out the handle and then helped Cody and Mansour make a bird house. Then I helped Marley to make a puzzle thing. That was choose Tuesday, I really enjoyed it.

NZ Native Bird Talk

Sooooo ms best came to Owairaka school and taught us about bird's and pests. It  was very interesting and I never new that a kereru was so big it was huge. And the tui has two voice boxes one sounds like a old man having a heart attack and one is so high pitched that we can't hear it those are some facts that i learnt.

how will you be rememberd?

Your legacy;

How will you be remembered?

1. A person who is my hero is Elton John
2. This person is my hero because he has done a lot of good things for the world like start a foundation for sick people.
3. Two words that describe this person are fantastic stunning & unbelievable.
4. One thing the person does that I admire Elton john has set up a foundation for sick people first in the United States in 1992 and then in the United Kingdom in 1993.
5. One way I can be more like my hero is did what he did make a foundation for sick people to help the world
6. Are you a hero? Write a few sentences telling about something that you did that you think was heroic i was in a store that sell's tv's and a tv fell over and i court it and that made me fell heroic.

my holiday writing