in the holidays

In the holidays i went to Rotorua on Friday and came back on Saturday night when we got there it was night so we had dinner then went to bed. In the morning we had breakfast then we went to the pools it so soo so hot. After that we watched a marathon. & once we had finished watching them we went to some carnival games. I went the worlds tallest inflatable slide then I shot an air rifle and hit the target. Then I shot a minigun with 100 bullets in 3 second's and won a prize of 50 dollar dollar. then we went home. and sat on the coach & watched tv for like 3 hours  then went to bed. In the morning I went to Vinnie's and Mason. We cut down a tree a big tree it had taken a while.

My hero

said is dead

Insert words instead of said to convey the meaning of the sentence

"It's wonderful!" mumbled  Franny.

“Stop that!” Rowena screamed.

“Did I upset her in some way?” yodelled Lucas.

“It’s your fault”  Mason

“We need to get out of here quickly,” Finley yeld

“I like that!” buzzed Sarah

“Give that back to me now!” Ava pleaded

“I don’t want to go in there” screamed Saana

“SIT DOWN!” Mrs O’Shea hissed 

“Can I please borrow a pen?” Kody mumble

“Hey! Come over here!” Rutva yeld in pane

“What shall we do now?” asked Tamati

“I’m sorry” Marley for bullying you 

“Has anybody seen my lunchbox?” asked James angrily

“Watch out!” Ariella-Brooke growled

“Oh, you gave me a fright!”sang Zac 

“Let’s go this way then Mrs O’Shea might not see us” whisperd Matilda

“I can’t believe it!” Mansour uttered

Richie Story

The ball came scoring to Richie like a jet he opened his hands caught the ball. He past it on to his team mates.
As soon as he got put to the ground he ran like the wind. There team was wining by 16 nil. There where to
defenders & then Richie. His team past a great ball over the to defender’s. The commentators said it was the best
try of the year & the crowd went wild his team mates congratulation him. & at the end of the match he was sooo
happy.

The end...

Hero's Richie mcCaw)

Movie Thingy

my story plan for richie mccaw