sick sentences

The ball came soaring towards Richie like a  flying saucer. He jumped into the air as high as he could  . He shout out his hands as fast as a rocket . He was so excited to win the world cup. It was up to him to score the try......... 

Show don't tell

tell: Jack black was shocked
 his heart raced a million miles & his face was as pale as a penguin stomach.jack black was shocked as he walked into his room and his fries where gone and his eyes watered like a water fall.

tell: ad revenue please was excited to see his dad
jumping up and down like a crazy kangaroo running as fast as a Lamborghi and hugging as tight as a bear.

tell: Kody was sad.
tears ran down Kody's eyes as his lips quivered because his dad went to war and didn't come back.

film festival stuff

film festival  stuff

Today we went  to the film festival and watch 14 short films my favourite movie was the frog one

because it look's the same as what a actual a frog or a tadpole look's like. I just like how it look so 

real.  It's cool that when he falls  a sleep he grow's legs and arms it is just Soooo cool 

chose Tuesday writing

So I did carpentry I did it with Marley, Cody & Mansour  in my class. I am  making a cricket bat I've cut out the handle and then helped Cody and Mansour make a bird house. Then I helped Marley to make a puzzle thing. That was choose Tuesday, I really enjoyed it.